Poetry corner

Here is some of my poems...I don't consider myself a poet by any means but wanted some feed back...if you like em or if you think people would buy a book full of ones like this!!!

THANKS

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This one is called Feel

I feel like a stranger

I feel all alone

I feel helpless and hopeless

With no place to go

I feel like a gambler

Risking it all

I feel like a begger

Wondering what went wrong

I feel like a child

So young and niave

I feel like an adult

Still striving to chase my dreams

I feel like a burden

To heavy to carry

I feel like a bird

Without wings

I wish I could shake this

I wish it would go away

I wish I would feel worth it

I wish today everything

Would just be

OKAY

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I titled this You won't win

Your nothing but memories

Your nothing but tears

You’re nothing but an addiction

Your nothing but fears

You try to contain me

You try to hold me back

You try to leash me

You want me to come back

You strike at my heart

You strike at my soul

You strike at my mind

You want me to lose all control

You want to be my master

You want to be my boss

You want to be my lover

You want to be my  friend

I’m tired of running

I’m tired of fear

I’m tired of forgiving

I’m tired of tears

You can’t have me

You don’t deserve this

You can’t rip me apart

For nothing

You won’t win

Like this

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the last one of this blog...its untitled

We refuse to give in

We refuse to let go

We refuse to turn left

But it’s so hard to control

Our time together is fleeting

Our time together is scarce

Our time together seems to evaporate

Our time together disappears

You can’t freeze this

You can’t hide the truth

You can’t disguise your love

You can’t just let it go

Why did this happen?

Why did this have to end?

Why did you lead me on?

Why did I we commit a sin?

Where am I to go?

Where am I to hide?

Where am I to wander?

Without anyone passing by